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Post by ~Rikku~ on Oct 18, 2008 17:26:13 GMT -5
Swiftpaw paced around, eager for the other cats to return. His ears pricked to the voice of Spottedleaf. "You be careful, or your paws might fall off!" The amusement in her mew told him that she was particularly happy. Just then, paw steps entered the ravine. "Welcome, Lionheart." Bluestar nodded to the warrior. The sparkle in her eyes said she had just visited her kits. Cinderpelt took her place around the pool of water that centered in the middle. "Aren't some missing?" She asked quizzically. Runningwind had entered as soon as she mentioned it. "Sorry I'm late," the tom mewed, a trace of guilt in his voice. Many cats still were to come. Sootfur, Rainwhisker, Hazelpaw, Shrewpaw, Frostfur, and lastly, Redtail, stomped into the ravine, taking their place behind the pool. The elders preferred not to come. "Now," mewed Bluestar. "Shall we begin?" All the cats focused deeply on the pool, and the shape of a fiery orange tom- Firestar- appeared. A mist surrounded the ravine, and a low voice whispered: Fire will be quenched, ice shall freeze, trees will burn, and snow will melt... The cats, froze in awe, interpreted the prophecy. It was Firestar's end. Yes, this is Warriors
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Post by VaatiFan101 on Oct 18, 2008 19:57:51 GMT -5
Wow...this is really good. ^^ You're a brilliant writer!
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Post by ~Rikku~ on Oct 19, 2008 12:03:45 GMT -5
Thanks ^^' Kinda short, when I write it seems so long but when I read it's sooo short.
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Post by Sakurafan01 on Dec 4, 2008 2:30:18 GMT -5
SHould I put up a story of one of my characters that isn't one on here but I can make him one? ^^
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